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Friday, March 11, 2016

Syrup - Fiction

Syrup Harvest is a two part story that came to me due to making maple syrup.

It's not the type of story you'd expect to be generated from such an activity.

1 comment:

  1. Biggest suggestions would be to have either more spaced out paragraph breaks, or tabs. The other more macro note would be, the reveal seems to come about halfway into the story. It takes away some of the punch. I would be tempted to save the reveal to closer to the end...